Panic at Succubus High! - Part 2
Note: All involved parties are 18+, obviously.
"So, class, I hope that you'll be supportive of Mark's- Ah, Mako's sudden transition," Mr Franklin said to the class. "It's a bit unprecedented and we've never really had a case like this in this school before, but times are changing, so we should be as open to it as we can."
Mako sighed as she averted her eyes. If the boys were going to be supportive, they were going to do it in a rather...perverse way. Already she could feel the twenty-or-so pairs of eyes staring at her breasts. She made her walk of shame back to her seat, right next to Cain's.
"I can't believe they're falling for that," Cain whispered to her as Mako reached into her bag and pulled out the Grand Guide. The mysterious grey tome was the reason why she was able to fix some of the issues that arose from her transformation. It half-made up for the fact that it was the reason for the transformation in the first place.
After their wild fuck session on the school roof the previous day, Mako and Cain had skipped their classes trying to figure out what had happened. Mysteriously, Mako was beginning to understand certain sentence fragments within the tome's pages, and Cain was able to parse some of the letterings as well. Neither could decipher the majority of the pages, however, and both the spell that had transformed her and how she summoned the book remained an elusive mystery.
However, the two had made a bit of a discovery; Mako could apparently cast some of the spells scrawled within. There were some useful ones: illusion magic to hide her demonic features and clothing magic to change her suggestive attire into something more school appropriate. There were also some...not so useful ones as well. She certainly wasn't going to use lust induction any time soon, much to Cain's disappointment.
One particular spell she had cast was something called 'Perception Changer'. It could rewrite how people view her. Unfortunately, she seemed to have no control over how people would see her, resulting in the misunderstanding that everyone had in believing she had suddenly transitioned. Well, it was technically true, but suddenly transitioning overnight and gaining a rocking set of tits felt a bit too far-fetched and a bit disingenuous for a cover story.
As Mr Franklin began his lesson on solving inequalities, Mako began to bury her head inside the book, reading line after line, trying to decipher what was written. She occasionally looked back up at the board, pretending to pay attention, only to catch the other students taking peeks at her. She needed to turn back as soon as she could.
And so, half a math period passed as Mako fruitlessly tried to transcribe the book. Mr Franklin had to take a call in the middle of the lesson, and the class went into disarray as it naturally does as soon as he left the room.
Mako could see most of the guys turning to face her, some whispering to each other and cracking jokes between themselves. Then, suddenly, Cain stood up and leaned against her desk, blocking their direct view of her. He gave them a quick stern look before turning back to Mako with his regular dopey smile. "So, any luck?"
"Uh, n-no, not really," Mako stammered before composing herself. She flipped through the book to a sticky-noted page. "I can only understand everything up to Perception Warper. Everything after that is muddied."
"What about this one?" Cain asked, pointing to the last spell on the page. "Inma...zilea...or?"
"It reads Normalize...something. The second part is cut off, and the description is still untranslated."
"Normalize… Maybe it'll turn everything back to normal!" Cain exclaimed, drawing a bit more attention to the pair. The confusion was apparently visible on Mako's face as he decided to continue. "Look, sometimes, demons get caught, so maybe they invented a spell that resets everything."
"Or, more likely, the spell fucks me over even more. Maybe it'll make everyone think I was always a girl!"
"At least they won't think you transitioned anymore," Cain chuckled, though Mako just felt more tired than before. The boy leaned over, and shoulder hugged his friend. He could feel her boobs pressing into his side, but he tried not to focus on them. "Hey, even if it doesn't work, it's not the end of the world. We'll just try something else later."
"...Fine, let's try it," Mako sighed. She didn't know why, but Cain always seemed to help her relax.
"Atta girl." Cain released his arm before patting her on the back. "Now, let's see some magic happen!"
"Right now? Okay, uh…" Mako traced the spell with her finger. She stared at it deeply, focusing heavily as the translated words seemed to morph back into their original lettering. "Nuwo nime toin nurt dona…."
"Sorry, class, but fun time is over. Take your seats," Mr Franklin said as he returned. "Jordan, get off the desk, and you, Mako, put that book-"
"...naimod sith nifed!" Mako finished chanting as her eyes began to glow a deep pink. All of a sudden, a burst of magical energy erupted from her body, spreading across the room, transforming everything it touched. Books and pens seemed to change, the tiling on the walls gained a new purplish coat of paint, and the equations on the chalkboard were erased, replaced with various notes and diagrams.
"W-what happened?" Mako asked as the energy continued to ebb through the room. She looked down at her body; nothing seemed to have changed. "Hey, Cain. Do...do you remember male me?"
"Yeah, don't worry. Nothing happened on your end," Cain said, looking exactly as he did before. His dopey expression was replaced by one of worry, however, as his eyes traced around the classroom.
The pink glow of magic seemed to be gathering around some of the boys. As one inhaled the strange particles, he nearly bent over, seemingly in pain, before two demonic wings ripped out of his back. Another fell over as his legs plumped up, and a pointed tail sprouted from his expanding rear. The aforementioned Jordan clutched his chest before two giant tits, though not as big as Mako's, ripped his shirt asunder.
"Normalize my ass!" Mako exclaimed as she stood up, rushing to the side of the nearest fallen afflicted boy. She tried to help him up, but his rapidly shifting body made it difficult for him to stand. All she could do was watch his lust-stricken face morph into a girl's. "What the fuck is happening?"
"I think... they're turning into succubi," Cain answered. Around him, he watched as the boys' bodies contorted and changed, growing bigger busts, bigger asses, longer hair, and new damp pussies. They were all enraptured in some kind of pleasure, moaning in ever-higher pitches. "It's like a horror film...but way hotter."
"You can't be serious- Oh God, Mr. Franklin!" Mako's attention shifted from chiding Cain to their teacher, bent over on the front desk, already halfway through his transformation. The two quickly ran to the front, helping their teacher up as he continued to change.
His grizzled face had already melted away as his hair gained a greyish hue, gaining a more mature, womanly look. His shirt had already popped a couple buttons as his new breasts were growing in. He reached down with manicured fingers to his crotch, grasping at the significant bulge before it shrunk away. His deep breaths raised to lewd, womanly moans right into Cain's ear, riling up the boy. Two blood-red wings and a tail ripped out of his back while brownish-grey horns extended from her head.
Seemingly no trace of their former teacher remained as Ms Franklin began to stabilize. The pinkish air began to collect around her and the transforming students once again, melting their clothes and forming newer, exposed fabrics that barely counted as dresses.
And then, suddenly, the room popped. At once, the pinkish glow faded away, and the last changes settled.
"Ah...is it over?" Mako asked, looking around. Their math classroom had completely changed; besides the renovated walls and floor, the various math infographics and images had turned into provocative diagrams about genitalia. Cain tapped her shoulder, guiding her towards the chalkboard filled with various drawings of sex positions.
The students, both transformed and not, shook themselves awake. However, instead of freaking out, they proceeded to adjust themselves, getting themselves back into order.
"Ah~ That was a bit weird. I suppose magical accidents happen occasionally," Ms Franklin said, as though nothing strange had happened.
"Why is no one freaking about this?" Mako whispered to Cain.
"I don't know...but look at Franklin though," Cain whispered back, his eyes glued to their transformed teacher. Almost nothing remained of their gruff, blunt math teacher. Instead, there stood a mature, kind-looking woman with demonic features, an incredible bust size, and wore a very liberal halterneck dress.
"Well, since we're all okay, let's continue with our lesson. I want every demon to pair up with someone, and we'll start practicing," Ms Franklin said. Mako and Cain watched as excitement built in the classroom. Some of the succubus girls giggled amongst themselves, while others immediately darted towards one of the boys. They all seemed playful and erotic, adjusting their clothes, flashing their privates, and even straddling their partners. One couple began to make out suddenly.
"Uh… Mr- I mean, Ms. Franklin-" Cain started.
"Oh, call me Firis, dear," Firis Franklin interrupted with a smile. "Franklin is a bit too...masculine of a surname for me."
"...Okay. F-Firis," Mako struggled to correct himself. Their teacher only giggled at his attempt. Cain eyed Mako before carefully thinking about what to say. "I'm sorry! I had been sleeping through class, so I'm not sure what we're doing right now."
"Oh, you naughty boy," Firis scolded, wagging her finger before giggling to herself once again. Mako nearly cringed; Mr Franklin would yell down a student if even one of them dozed off. Seeing her as a succubus playfully teasing her student instead gave her a sense of whiplash. "We do what we always do in sex ed: practice!"
"Practice…" Mako looked around the classroom again. All of the students had already been partnered off and started to have fun. She blushed as she finally listened in to the lewd moans of the succubi as they were pounded, dicked, and fucked in all sorts of ways.
"It's important for young succubi such as yourselves to learn how to properly feed on a man," Firis said to Mako. Apparently, her status as a succubus was known to the teacher. "And it would do these boys better to learn how to please a girl. I suppose you two will be partnering up."
"I...uh…"
"Mako is...dealing with her transition right now," Cain interjected. "I wouldn't want to trouble her."
"Oh, you're right. I'm sorry, Mako. I didn't take you into consideration," Firis apologized. Mako was partly relieved, though even more confused. The transition backstory was still a thing? Do they think she transitioned from a man to a succubus? Was that even possible in any other circumstance? "Oh, I even had an extra boy transferred in to balance partners. I suppose there's no one left for you, Cain."
"It's...alright," Cain said with a pained expression. Mako could guess he would have preferred fucking one of the students. For some reason, she felt a little jealous.
"Well, I suppose you'll have to do it with me," Firis giggled. Cain's eyes widened in confusion as the teacher snapped her fingers, and her hand glowed green. In an instant, all of his clothes vanished, leaving him naked and his erect cock exposed.
"M-m-miss! What are you doing?" Mako asked, blushing through her fingers as she tried to cover her face. Firis couldn't hear her, though, instead strutting towards Cain, planting her huge, soft breasts on his chest. She giggled again before pushing him down onto her desk.
"Ah, it's been so long since I've had essence this fresh," Firis mumbled to herself as her hands traced their way around Cain's body. A fraction of Cain wanted to move away, but the rest was forcing him to hold his breath in anticipation, nearly letting an unprompted moan as her fingers reached his cock. "Class! We'll be having a live demonstration, so please follow along!"
Some of the couples had slowed down and turned to her. Some succubi mimicked her, pushing their partners down onto a nearby desk. A few in the back, however, ignored her, preferring to continue at their own loud, messy, and lust-filled pace. She decided to ignore them, focusing her attention on the boy in front of her.
"While I understand you all have desires you want to fulfill, if you want to have a proper feeding, you should make sure your partner is enjoying it as well," Firis lectured as her delicate fingers wrapped around Cain's cock. She began to stroke it gently, giggling at Cain's lustful expression. "Offering your partner a handjob is a good way to start things off. Isn't it, Cain?"
Cain couldn't hear her, or if he could, he was too paralyzed by pleasure to answer her. He felt like putty in her hands, letting her play and tease his cock any way she wanted. He could barely hold in his moans as her hand rhythmically danced up and down his shaft, sending waves of pleasure through his lower half. He could feel her lift his head, pulling it towards her bounteous chest.
"This is a bit of an advanced technique, but you should try it if you can. If you pour enough magical energy into your breasts, then with a little pressure… Ah~" Firis moaned as beads of white liquid started to spurt out of her nipples and run down her chest. "You can produce a little milk for your mark."
Mako, standing to the side to give the two space, watched them intently through open fingers. Succubi could just lactate, just like that? Was it that simple? From the corner of her eye, she could see a couple of pairs attempting to do the same, though only one could manage it. A thought entered her head; was it possible for her? She lowered one hand to her own chest, touching her erect nipple through the thin layer of fabric in wonderment.
As Firis continued, she pressed Cain against her lactating nipple. He held his breath, laying against the soft breast meat, before feeling an incredible thirst. She let out a playful squeal as he planted his lips against her areola, sucking the sweet, white nectar straight from the tap.
"As you… Ah~ ...might be able to see… Oh~ ...Cain seems quite fond of my milk," Firis tried to lecture, only to moan through it. Cain continued to suck more intently, turning the tables on his teacher as his tongue played with her nipple, licking and lapping at her milk. "Ah~ Cain, you naughty boy~ Class! Did you know that your milk is an acceptable channel for certain spells? For example, with a bit of lust induction…."
Firis's hands started to glow once again as Cain felt a stronger, sweeter taste fill his mouth. His cock suddenly felt stiffer and more sensitive, the feeling making the rest of his body feel numb in comparison to the pleasure of her hands.
Mako had completely forgone both hands covering her face, one playing with her nipple and another reaching down to her soaking wet sex. Her hazy thoughts were focused on Cain's cock. For some reason, she could tell how pent-up it was. How it longed to be released. And she wanted to be the one to release it. To let its seed flow into her. She could only attribute these feelings to her succubus side...because if they weren't, then she wasn't sure if she could suppress them.
Firis also seemed to have noticed Cain's building release, and she began to quicken her pace. Her hands were stroking his cock much faster, feeling his pulsing shaft just begging for release. Cain released his grip on her breasts, letting out a cry of pleasure. "M-miss! I'm about to cum!"
Like a volcano, Cain shot ropes and ropes of white, sticky cum into the air, splattering mostly Firis in a bukkake. She let out a happy sigh as she wiped a bit off her cheek and brought it to her mouth, relishing in its taste. She was about to release her grip on his cock when she suddenly noticed something odd. Despite dressing her in cum, it was still hard and pulsing. "My, my, Cain. Aren't you energetic?"
Seemingly hypnotized, Firis began to climb atop of Cain, hovering over him as he realized what was happening. She giggled at his dopey face before lowering and penetrating her wet snatch on his stiff mast. She let out a long, drawn-out moan as she slid herself up and down.
Cain, still lightheaded thanks to the lust induction, could only think about the pleasure coming from his cock. While it felt good, it seemed too...slow. He wanted to go faster. He craved going harder. He suddenly grabbed Firis's hips, much to her surprise, before forcing her down the rest of his shaft.
Firis let out a scream of pleasure as she orgasmed, alerting the other feeding succubi as Cain flipped the tables on the two of them. He moved his hands and hips in unison, pounding the teacher without giving her a break. The students that had finished their feedings were now watching the scene, staring at Firis's face as it contorted into one of visceral pleasure.
"C-C-Cain! Slow down," Firis tried to say, but Cain couldn't seem to listen as he continued to use his teacher like a fleshlight. At some point, Firis eventually gave up on maintaining her proper demeanour, letting herself cry freely in joy as she was used.
Without warning, Cain bucked his hips, and he pulled Firis down, blasting a splurt of cum right into her. She cried out at the same time before falling forward onto Cain's chest, unable to move.
The two breathed for several seconds, trying to recover their senses. Firis began to slowly climb off his flaccid dick, letting his cum dribble from her pussy onto the floor. It was still just as thick as his first load.
"Ah~ I apologize, class. I seemed to have gotten too into it," Firis half-giggled, half-sighed. The other succubi giggled in unison, while the male students were only focused on their teacher's dripping pussy.
As Cain finally sat up, he noticed Mako standing in the corner, her shirt unbuttoned as she fondled her chest, and her skirt hiked up as she rubbed her clit. The two had a brief period of silence before Cain's flaccid, leaking cock suddenly sprung up once more.
"I-I-It's not what it looks like! I was just...just…" Mako stammered, trying to come up with an excuse. Firis looked at her and her dishevelled appearance, then at Cain's erect cock, before cracking a warm, motherly smile.
"Ah, there's still some time before the end of class. I won't hold you two up," Firis said, stepping away. Mako looked at her, feeling a sense of betrayal, before turning back to Cain, already approaching her.
"I didn't need to cover for you, did I?" Cain asked with a mischievous grin. Before Mako could refute, he grabbed her waist, pulling her in for a passionate kiss. His other hand went to her breast, kneading it like it was dough. Mako initially thought to resist but instead let herself go, letting him push her against the desk.
With one swift movement, Cain pulled down her skirt, revealing her pussy, begging to be filled. As he released the kiss, he looked at her intensely, causing her blush to redden even further. These feelings were just the succubus talking. They didn't mean anything...right?
"...P-put it in…" Mako whispered, and Cain sneered. With a forceful thrust, he entered her, and the two moaned in unison.
At first, it was slow, rhythmic thrusts, letting them enjoy the moment as their lust continued to build. Mako took the initiative, moving her hips so that he plunged deeper, crying out in pleasure as she felt even more of him enter her. Cain, not wanting to be one-upped, quickened his pace, giving her no time as the only sounds that came out of her were moans cut off by other moans. If their start was called sex, then their current pace was fucking. It was just like before on the rooftop; his switch had been turned on, and it wouldn't turn off until he was satisfied.
Cain began to near his climax, and Mako could sense it too, somehow. She didn't even need a warning; her legs curled around him, pulling him in closer as he cummed, shooting his spunk straight into her sex. The two squealed as they orgasmed, just as a pink crest formed on Mako's crotch.
Mako, caught in her lust, could suddenly feel power swelling from her nether regions. It warmed her, filled her, and then...it overflowed. Like a cup with too much water, she could feel that energy start to pour back into her crotch as it began to glow brighter.
Suddenly, a burst of magical energy filled the room once more, changing and transforming its inhabitants once again. Her crest glowed again, and she could feel Cain's lust spike from his throbbing, still hard-as-rocks cock. She was casting spells wildly, and she couldn't seem to control it.
"C-Cain…" Mako moaned as Cain continued to pound away, driven by his cock's desires. He grabbed her breasts again, rubbing her nipples. At first, she thought it was just his horny mind, but then she remembered what she had seen only moments prior.
She began to focus, or at least focus as much as she could, while Cain slid in and out of her. She directed that inner power from her crotch up, feeling it pool around her breasts. Yet, it couldn't seem to come out, like it was blocked by something. It needed to be pushed out by force.
Mako and Cain looked at each other, sharing a brief moment of understanding. They knew what they had to do. Mako let herself go, releasing her hold on Cain as he began to thrust faster, harder. Their bodies clapped together even louder, echoing through the classroom. She could feel her lust reach its breaking point, and Cain likewise.
And with that, they orgasmed. Mako cried out in pleasure as milk erupted from her breasts, far more than what should be stored there. Cain pulled out, spraying his still-thick load all over Mako, staining her clothes in hot, sticky cum.
The crest began to dissipate as the energies in the class subsided. Completely drained, Cain took a step back before falling over onto the ground, his flaccid cock spurting a few more drops of load before finally finishing. In her effort to keep him up, Mako fell over too, landing on his chest, her breasts sprawled out over his pecs.
The two laid there for who knew how long, simply relishing in their relief. Mako twisted her head up to see the rest of the class of succubi, who had apparently all finished themselves and had been watching the two intently.
Something did bug her, though. Were there always this many succubi?
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"...and that's why you should be careful with how much essence you absorb, Mako!" Firis scolded the girl as she quietly buttoned up her dirtier clothing. Cain was off to the side, reading through the Grand Guide while putting back on the clothes Firis had whisked away. The rest of the class had already cleared out, though Mako was held back as Firis lectured her about the dangers of feeding. "I understand you were hungry, but it's still dangerous if you don't pay attention!"
Mako chuckled weakly as she touched her crotch, tracing where the crest used to be. Apparently, the 'male essence' that succubi fed off of cum, but rather a separate energy men release when they orgasm (Cum was just a delicious side dish, as Firis commented).
The crest that had shown itself was something of a biological defence mechanism for succubi who absorb too much energy, as Mako had done to Cain. Once it glowed, it would start discharging magical spells in an effort to rid the body of its excess, in a similar yet much more dangerous way to how Mako had shot milk from her breasts.
"Hah… At least you didn't cast anything other than lust induction on Cain…." Firis sighed. Mako's eyes looked away in embarrassment, though not for the reason her teacher expected.
She had cast another spell. Specifically, the 'Normalize... Something' spell that had originally transformed the class. It could rewrite minds, so of course, Firis wouldn't have noticed the differences. Only Mako and Cain could clearly see how the remaining male students were transformed, turned into succubi like the other half before them. Now, there was a full class of succubi wandering around, probably drawing the attention of the remaining 99% of the school.
"I hope you keep these lessons to heart, Mako. And remember to feed regularly so you don't end up hungry again."
Mako dutifully nodded. She had been relieved when she learned that her sex craze earlier was actually her succubus side talking. While succubi were inherently lustful creatures, they reached another league when they were low on magical power, entering an intense and uncontrollable heat that wouldn't subside until they got dicked at least once. Mako, who didn't have a deep reserve thanks to having only turned a day ago, had run dry thanks to the 'Normalize… Something' spell she had purposefully cast. It meant that her strange, wanton desires for Cain were just natural feelings and would go away once she turned back.
It also, unfortunately, meant that she was going to need Cain's help occasionally.
"Well, if you understand," Firis said, her angry demeanour fading back into her regular motherly kindness. "I'm sorry I've kept you here for so long. And Cain, I'm sorry that I forced myself on you."
"It's no problem, Miss," Cain said, buttoning up his shirt, his nose still buried deep within the book. Apparently cumming four times in a row had cleansed him of all his worldly desires. Although Mako knew they'd probably come back in an hour, it was nicer to see a calmer, collected Cain. "Say, can we ask you something? Do you know what this spell is?"
Cain held up the page containing the problematic spell. Mako squinted, feeling slightly lightheaded as the garbled words began to make sense, somehow. "Normalize… Domain?" she read.
"Hmm? A domain spell?" Firis questioned before taking the book from Cain's hands. Her expression was puzzled, and she began to rifle through the pages of the book, more confused than before. "Where did you two find this book?"
"It was from the-"
"Mako somehow summoned it," Cain interrupted Mako, giving her a subtle look. She might not have believed them if they said Cain had just picked it off the shelves. At least with the weirdness surrounding Mako, they could play it off. Besides, it was true she did summon it, somehow.
"Really? It might be an old bloodline tome then. I just found it quite odd; the spells written inside use more modernized linguistic casting methods, but it's still written in an old, archaic language. Perhaps it was written around the mid-1700s when Alvinella had… Oh, I'm sorry! I've begun rambling again, haven't I?" Firis apologized once more. Normally when Mr Franklin rambled on about his hobby of studying ancient artefacts, Cain and Mako would be quite bored. They were still somewhat bored, but they were at least glad a holdover from before her transformation was useful. "I'm sorry, but the language is a bit too complex for me to understand."
Mako took the book back from Firis and began to turn through the pages herself, understanding more bits and pieces than she could before. Cain, on the other hand, was quietly contemplating. "That's okay. You mentioned 'domain' spells and 'bloodline tomes' earlier? Can you elaborate?"
"I can do my best," Firis giggled before thinking carefully about it. "Bloodline tomes are something like familial relics. Typically parents update and add things, then pass them down to a child when they're of age. Since Mako's is quite old, it must be something from an ancestor rather than her parents or grandparents. Domain spells...well… I've heard about them before but never seen them used. Older demons would use them to claim territory and expand their influence. Much of that fell out of practice in the past one hundred years, though. I'm sorry if I'm not helpful."
"No, no, you've helped a lot," Cain said, his eyes beginning to linger on Firis's chest. Mako severely overestimated the duration of his sage mode.
What Firis said about domain spells seemed to fall in line with the tome. From what Mako could understand of its description, it would convert a domain into one that fitted the caster. If she was currently a succubus, then was her domain a school of succubi? Perhaps the spell was a bit too dangerous to test willy nilly.
"I think we should get going," Mako said, looking at the clock and packing up her bag. "Sorry we've asked you so much."
"Oh, no, it's perfectly fine. If you need any more help with spells or ancient tomes, just ask," Firis said. Just as Mako and Cain were about to leave, their teacher said one final thing to them. "Oh! And Cain? You should go check in with a doctor if you can."
"Hmm? But I feel fine though," Cain said, pausing.
"Well, most men wouldn't be after cumming so many thick loads in a row. Then again, you are a growing boy…" Firis seemed to pause, reminiscing about how good his spunk had tasted.
"That wasn't because of the lust induction?" Mako asked. She and Cain had been assuming that to be the case the whole time.
"Oh, no. Lust induction only spikes its target's lust. It doesn't do anything to actually increase one's production. If you think you're fine, then I won't force you, but still, I think you should get checked out."
As Mako and Cain said their farewells, the two contemplated what Firis had said. She was right; four loads in quick succession, each one as thick as the last, was unnatural, if not impossible. Perhaps Cain's body was changing in ways as well.
In fact, in regards to change, why hasn't Cain been affected by Mako's spells? He could be lust-inducted, sure, but Normalize Domain had not affected him in the slightest, despite turning every other boy into a lusty demon.
Right now, their afterglow feeling was being replaced by a sense of confusion. Firis answered only a fragment of the many still shrouded mysteries eluding the two. They had a feeling that it was going to be a long while until they finally got some answers.
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Images come from Motto! Haramase! Honoo no Oppai Isekai Chou Ero Succubus Gakuen!
Hi y'all, Kias here. I said before that other parts won't be as long. I lied. I'm sorry. This hits like 5k words. The sex scenes alone are 2k. I hope that's enough to justify the 1k exposition dump at the end. While I hope to make them shorter, I am already planning at least another chapter or two around this length. Although I made a lot of gags about Mako's 'transition', don't expect this story to really veer into 'she really always wanted to be a woman', since this is ultimately a story about nympho demons, and it'd feel disingenuous if I went there. I'm sorry if it offends or vibes with you a bit badly.
For some unfortunate news, I think I'll be putting Fur Red on the back burner, at least until Panic! is done. It just involves me being more inspired to write this than that. It would help if someone had given me a better title for it. So, if we think about it, it's your fault I'm pausing it. You should be ashamed of yourselves.
Leave a comment if you enjoyed this series, I really want to see engagement. Thank you for your time, and your support is greatly appreciated!
Great read so far, noticed there were 1 or 2 points in this chapter where Mako gets referred to as "he" by Firis, is it intentional or typo'd?
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DeleteHow about "Fur Fire Red"? Alliteration adds much to a simple title.
ReplyDeleteMaybe "An Imperfect Pokemon Experience"
Great story, will we ever get part 3?
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